In hitting the target. We describe about Jeffery.
Thursday, July 8, 2021
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Kia ora Mae,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great piece of writing! I like all the descriptive words you have used to make it interesting to read. I can picture Jeffery in my head when you describe what he looks like in the first sentence. I wonder what kind of animals he hunts in the forest? Well done!
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Hi Mae - thanks for sharing your colourful Blog post! I love the descriptive words that you have used in your writing. Very impressive! Did you manage to watch any archery during the Olympics? It is such a skilled sport. I wonder who is a better at archery than Jeffery? Maybe you could continue with your story & describe that person. Take care. Jen TA (Awhi below)
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